Judge an outline by what it lets you explain and evaluate. The paragraph breaks should help the reader follow that work.
Underline the terms and relationships you need to examine. Beside each planned section, note how it advances that examination; several terms may need to be considered together.
Choose cases that can support, challenge or clarify the claim. A TOK argument need not make an empirical prediction, but you should explain what the case allows you to infer.
If your plan contains a section labelled the other side, specify the view and what challenges it raises. Then decide where you can evaluate those challenges most effectively.
Review sentences that describe your essay, paragraphs or sections. Delete redundant announcements, but retain the guidance a reader needs to follow the reasoning.
Write a short note on each section's job. Keep introductions, comparisons, objections and conclusions where they help the reader follow and assess your argument. Revise sections whose purpose you cannot explain.