Loading subject…
(or: when the storyteller might not be telling the whole truth)
The narrator tells a story. The reader works out the story.
“I’m quite ill at ease, I mean if you want to know the truth, but I act as if I’m not.”
“I was carried away in the direction of my duty rather than in the direction of my fears.”
You can analyse unreliable narrators using PEEL.
Solution
The narrator appears unreliable because they minimise their own responsibility and shift blame onto someone else. This is evident when the narrator claims, “I don’t remember exactly what I said to her,” before insisting that “she overreacted.” The vague memory suggests selective forgetting, while the confident judgement places fault on the other character rather than questioning their own behaviour. This contradiction encourages the reader to doubt the narrator’s version of events and suspect that important details are being ignored or distorted. As a result, the unreliable narration builds tension by creating uncertainty about what really happened and highlights the narrator’s lack of self-awareness.
Unreliable Narrator
An unreliable narrator is a storyteller whose account of events cannot be fully trusted because their perspective is distorted by bias, limited knowledge, emotional instability, or deliberate deception.