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(or: watching the story from the outside)
The narrator is watching the characters, not being one.
She told herself it didn’t matter, even as her hands tightened around the strap of her bag.
She told herself it didn’t matter, unaware that he had noticed her shaking hands and was already regretting what he had done.
You can analyse third-person narration using PEEL.
Solution
Third-person narration shapes the reader’s understanding of tension by controlling what each character knows and revealing a gap in awareness. This is evident when the narrator describes that “He avoided her gaze and tightened his grip on the door handle,” while also stating that “she had already decided to leave.” The narrator shows his nervous behaviour but makes it clear that he is unaware of her decision, creating dramatic irony. This contrast increases tension because the reader understands the situation more fully than the character does, anticipating the emotional impact of what is about to happen. As a result, the third-person perspective builds tension by separating the characters’ knowledge and highlighting the theme of miscommunication.
Third-person narration
Third-person narration is a narrative perspective in which the story is told by an external narrator who refers to characters using “he,” “she,” “they,” or their names, rather than “I.”