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(or: how writers make you see, hear, and feel things that aren’t really there)
Imagery
Imagery is the use of descriptive language to create clear pictures or sensations in the reader’s mind.
Imagery turns words into experiences.
You can analyse imagery using PEEL.
This is shown in the description “the shadows stretched across the cracked floor.”
The imagery of stretching shadows suggests darkness spreading and creates a sense of unease, making the setting feel threatening rather than safe.
As a result, the visual imagery reinforces the tense and unsettling atmosphere, shaping how the reader experiences the scene.
Solution
The writer uses tactile imagery to make the reader experience discomfort and tension in the moment. This is evident in the description “the air was thick and heavy, pressing against her chest.” The imagery makes the air feel physical and oppressive, as if it has weight, which mirrors the character’s sense of anxiety. By turning the atmosphere into something that presses against the body, the writer forces the reader to feel the same restriction and unease as the character. As a result, the tactile imagery intensifies the tense atmosphere and shapes the reader’s emotional response to the scene.