The Goal of Paper 2: Comparison, Not Just Analysis
- The biggest misconception about Paper 2 is thinking it's about analyzing each text in isolation. It’s not.
- Paper 2 is about putting two texts in conversation. You are being assessed on how well you compare and contrast, not how well you can write two separate mini-essays.
- A weak approach looks like this:
- Paragraph on Text A
- Paragraph on Text B
- One or two sentences comparing them at the end
- This is more like two Paper 1s stuck together. It does not score well.
- A strong Paper 2 essay:
- Makes comparison the central focus from the topic sentence onward
- Moves between the two texts purposefully and analytically
- Weaves similarities and differences throughout each point
Step-by-Step: How to Write a Comparative Body Paragraph
Step 1: Write a Comparative Topic Sentence
- Your topic sentence should:
- Introduce the analytical focus (your main point)
- Refer to both texts
- Make the relationship between them clear (similar or contrasting)
- While Khaled Hosseini’s A Thousand Splendid Suns presents silence as a form of survival under patriarchal oppression, Arthur Miller’s The Crucible portrays silence as a dangerous complicity in injustice.
- This topic sentence:
- Introduces a clear focus: the function of silence
- Refers to both texts and authors
- Sets up a contrast: survival vs. complicity
Step 2: Analyse a Key Moment in Text A
Begin by analyzing a key moment or quote from the first text that supports your point.
- In A Thousand Splendid Suns, Mariam’s silence in the courtroom after killing Rasheed is deeply symbolic. Rather than defend herself, she accepts her execution. Through understated narration and sparse dialogue, Hosseini presents this silence not as passivity but as an active choice, highlighting Mariam’s final assertion of agency in a life where her voice was consistently denied.
- Key features:
- One focused quote or moment
- Specific techniques (narration, dialogue)
- Links clearly to the umbrella point: silence as self-empowerment
Step 3: Transition into Text B Thoughtfully
- Now bring in Text B.
- Don’t start from scratch, respond directly to what you just explored in Text A.
- This works because:
- It addresses the same theme (silence)
- It contrasts the characters’ motivations and outcomes
- It identifies technique (dramatic irony) to deepen the analysis
Miller also explores the consequences of silence, though in a more morally charged context. In The Crucible, John Proctor initially remains silent about Abigail’s deception, allowing the witch trials to escalate. Miller’s use of dramatic irony here where the audience knows more than the characters casts Proctor’s silence as a failure of courage, not a survival strategy.
Step 4: Compare Explicitly and Insightfully
Once both texts have been analyzed, draw an explicit comparison.
While Mariam’s silence is an act of self-determination that redeems her in the eyes of the reader, Proctor’s silence intensifies the tragedy by allowing injustice to spread. Hosseini frames silence as a tool for reclaiming agency while Miller sees it as a moral failure.
- This is where the comparison becomes analytical and meaningful.
- It’s not just noting a similarity or difference, it explains why the difference exists and what effect it has.
Step 5: Conclude the Point
If time allows, briefly link back to your main idea and transition to the next point.
Both authors use silence to explore how power and morality shape human choices, though they arrive at very different conclusions about its worth.
Sample Comparative Body Paragraph
Let's put all these 5 steps together and see what a full sample comparative body paragraph looks like
While Khaled Hosseini’s A Thousand Splendid Suns presents silence as a survival tactic under patriarchal oppression, Arthur Miller’s The Crucible portrays it as dangerous complicity in injustice. Hosseini constructs Mariam as someone who endures Rasheed’s abuse in silence, “What harmful thing had she done…?” using internal narration and understated prose to show how silence protects her in a world where speaking out risks death. In contrast, Miller uses characters like Elizabeth Proctor and Giles Corey to highlight silence’s moral cost. Elizabeth’s quiet denial “No, sir” undermines John’s confession, while Corey’s refusal to name names leads to his death: “More weight.” Through dramatic irony and tense courtroom dialogue, Miller shows how silence, even when principled, can perpetuate injustice. Thus, Hosseini frames silence as private endurance, while Miller critiques it as public failure revealing how silence may either preserve life or enable oppression, depending on the sphere in which it operates.
Summary: Paragraph Structure
- Comparative topic sentence: sets up the idea and the texts
- Text A analysis: close reading with a focus on technique and effect
- Text B analysis: directly responds to the ideas in Text A
- Explicit comparison: brings both analyses together
- Link or transition: reinforces the point and guides the reader
- Only analyze material you can compare. If a quote or idea doesn’t lead to comparison, it doesn’t belong in Paper 2.
- Plan your points so the comparison feels natural. If you analyse one text too long, it becomes hard to link the second one effectively.
- Think in “pairs of ideas”, use the first text to set up a point, and the second text to respond to it.


