A step-by-step guide to structuring and writing a high-scoring essay including:
The HL Essay (HLE) is a 1,200–1,500 word literary analysis based on a text studied in the IB English HL course.
| Aspect | Details |
|---|---|
| Weighting | 25% of the final IB English HL grade |
| Assessment | Externally graded |
| Task | Develop an original line of inquiry (LOI) and analyze a work through one of IB’s 7 key concepts |
If you are fascinated by power and control, you might choose:
If you are interested in female oppression and gender inequality, you might choose:
The Line of Inquiry (LOI) is the research question that guides your essay.
| Concept | Sample LOI Ideas |
|---|---|
| Identity | How is the protagonist’s identity shaped by societal expectations? |
| Culture | How does the text depict cultural displacement? |
| Creativity | How does the writer use unconventional narrative techniques? |
| Communication | How does the text explore failures in communication? |
| Transformation | How does the protagonist’s transformation reflect historical change? |
| Perspective | How is a marginalized perspective portrayed? |
| Representation | How are gender roles represented through symbolism? |
Sample Structure for Identity:
Best Practices for a Strong LOI:
| Too Broad | Too Narrow | Just Right |
|---|---|---|
| How does the author explore oppression? | How does the author explore oppression through the use of red imagery in two paragraphs? | How does the author explore oppression through symbolism across the novel? |
| Section | Purpose | Word Count Guide |
|---|---|---|
| Introduction | Present the text, LOI, and argument | 150–200 words |
| Body Paragraphs (3-4) | Provide analysis using evidence and literary techniques | 1,000–1,200 words |
| Conclusion | Summarize findings and offer final insights | 150–200 words |
Your introduction sets up your argument and establishes direction. What to Include:
Example Introduction with Clear Linkage to Key Points
Each body paragraph should analyze a key aspect of the text using the PEEL method:
Example PEEL Paragraph (for LOI on Identity in The Namesake)
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