Overall Score: 21/22
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Criteria A: Introduction
6/6
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6
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Investigation aim and relevance
Excellent
Theory/model description and connection
Excellent
Hypothesis and variables
Criteria Feedback
- Aim is clearly stated and its relevance to schema theory and legal contexts is explicitly explained.
- Theory/model is accurately described and directly linked to the present investigation.
- Variables are correctly named and fully operationalized; both directional and null hypotheses are included.
- Minor grammatical lapses and occasional awkward phrasing (e.g., incomplete sentences) affect polish.
- Small inconsistencies in labeling the IV/DV wording could be tightened for clarity.
Criteria B: Exploration
4/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Research design
Excellent
Sampling and participants
Good
Variables and materials
Criteria Feedback
- Research design is not only described but coherently justified in terms of avoiding order and expectancy effects.
- Sampling technique and participant characteristics are both described and explained in relation to the target population.
- Controlled variables are clearly listed with solid justification for each choice.
- Random allocation to conditions is not explicitly detailed, which would strengthen internal validity.
- Explanation of material choices (beyond the video) could be deepened to show how each controls demand characteristics.
Criteria C: Analysis
6/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
Excellent
Statistical analysis
Excellent
Graphical presentation
Excellent
Findings interpretation
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
Moderate
Findings discussion
Excellent
Strengths and limitations
Excellent
Modifications
Criteria Feedback
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