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IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) HL Theory of Knowledge Example
What role do experts play in influencing our consumption or acquisition of knowledge?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: TOK Exhibition
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Does the exhibition successfully show how TOK manifests in the world around us?
Good
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Three specific objects are identified clearly and each is tied to a real setting, which gives the exhibition an authentic, lived-in quality rather than a generic one.
The central line of inquiry is consistent across the three objects: the student repeatedly examines how experts shape access to, interpretation of, and sequencing of knowledge.
Object 1 is particularly effective because it shows a genuine TOK distinction between experiencing information and being able to interpret it.
There is clear effort to justify why each object matters, and the exhibition does not drift away from the selected prompt.
Several claims are too broad or imprecise, especially in the discussion of mathematics, where expert agreement is sometimes confused with the nature of mathematical truth itself.
Some contextual details need tighter grounding in the specific object and setting, rather than sounding like general statements about schools, curricula, or assessment.
The analysis is uneven across the three objects: the first is more convincing than the second and third, which rely more on assertion than careful evidence.
The exhibition would be stronger with more explicit evaluation of the limits of expert authority, not just its usefulness.