IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) SL Theory of Knowledge Example

You selected three specific, real-world objects with clear personal significance and concrete contexts.

Your exhibition maintains a consistent and relevant focus on the relationship between personal experience and knowledge.

You make strong links between the objects and the prompt, especially when you use material details to support epistemic claims.

Your commentary shows genuine TOK thinking rather than simple description, and each object contributes something distinct to the overall argument.

Some claims, especially about motives and inner reasoning, are stated too confidently without enough evidence.

A few links would be stronger if you explained more precisely how the object itself supports the knowledge claim.

At times the discussion becomes broad, so the argument would benefit from more qualification and sharper examples of how experience changes or shapes knowledge.