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IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) SL Theory of Knowledge Example
What is the relationship between personal experience and knowledgeSL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: TOK Exhibition
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5
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Does the exhibition successfully show how TOK manifests in the world around us?
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The student uses three clearly specific real-world objects with authentic contexts, which makes the exhibition grounded and credible.
The student consistently connects each object to the chosen prompt through meaningful TOK tensions such as lived experience, mediation, and personal versus shared knowledge.
The student's commentary goes beyond description and explains why each object matters, showing clear analytical purpose.
The student supports their claims with concrete details from the objects themselves, which makes the exhibition persuasive and relevant.
Some claims would benefit from greater precision and nuance, especially where the student makes broad statements about what second-hand knowledge can or cannot do.
A few presentation issues, such as the inconsistent object numbering and the cookbook image not matching the discussed pages, slightly weaken clarity.
The final section becomes a little repetitive instead of extending or comparing the insights from the three objects in a more synthesised way.