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IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) HL Theory of Knowledge Example
M24 #6: Are we too quick to assume that the most recent evidence is inevitably the strongest? Discuss with reference to the natural sciences and one other area of knowledge.HL
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B
Official IB Result
IB Grade: B
Criteria A: TOK Essay
6/10
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5
10
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Understanding
Knowledge
Questions
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
The student stays clearly focused on the prescribed title and maintains a coherent line of argument throughout.
The student's use of specific, relevant examples (N-rays and the Hitler Diaries) gives the essay real TOK substance and prevents it from becoming purely abstract.
The student shows awareness of different perspectives, especially in the way they contrast skepticism with openness to new ideas and question whether consensus is always trustworthy.
The student's essay is organized and logically structured, making the comparison between the natural sciences and history easy to follow.
The evaluation is often broad rather than deeply developed, so the essay does not fully sustain the level of precision needed for the top band.
Some claims about the two areas of knowledge are too general or simplified, especially where history is treated as if consensus and objectivity operate too uniformly.
The argument would be stronger if the student more explicitly distinguished recency from other indicators of evidential strength such as replication, provenance, corroboration, and contextualization.
The conclusion does not fully resolve the tension between cases where newer evidence is misleading and cases where it is genuinely superior.