How do experts influence the acquisition and consumption of knowledge?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: TOK Exhibition
8/10
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5
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Does the exhibition successfully show how TOK manifests in the world around us?
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student selected a prompt that fits their three objects well and gives the exhibition a clear conceptual focus.
- The student identified three specific real-world objects and explained their contexts clearly.
- The student's commentary is focused and differentiated, with each object contributing a distinct angle on authority, expertise, and trust.
- The student supports many claims with concrete evidence, including dates, named sources, and specific details.
- The student's writing shows strong TOK awareness by moving beyond description to explain how knowledge is accepted, challenged, or shaped in practice.
- A few claims are stated more strongly than the evidence fully establishes.
- At times, the kind of expertise being discussed could be defined more precisely.
- Some causal language could be tightened so it distinguishes influence, correlation, and proven audience response.
- The student's reference formatting could be clearer and more consistent.