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IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) SL Theory of Knowledge Example
How can we know that current knowledge is an improvement upon past knowledge?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: TOK Exhibition
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Does the exhibition successfully show how TOK manifests in the world around us?
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student identifies three specific, real-world objects and keeps them anchored in lived contexts, which gives the exhibition clear authenticity.
The student's central organising idea is coherent: they consistently frame the objects through improvement, accuracy, effectiveness, accessibility, and practical usefulness.
The first object, on digital mapping, is the most convincingly developed because it includes concrete details and a clear real-world example of use.
The student shows some awareness of complexity by acknowledging that newer systems can also introduce bias or limitations.
Several important claims are too general or unsupported, so the argument does not always demonstrate improvement as convincingly as it asserts it.
The linocut example becomes misaligned with the object when the discussion shifts toward Photoshop and Procreate, which weakens the focus.
The exhibition sometimes treats “more interactive” or “more accessible” as automatically meaning better knowledge, without fully examining what makes the knowledge itself more reliable or justified.
Some points would be stronger with specific examples or sources, especially where the student refers to research, disaster response, or historical comparison.