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IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) SL Theory of Knowledge Example
Does some knowledge belong only to particular communities of knowers?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: TOK Exhibition
5/10
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5
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Does the exhibition successfully show how TOK manifests in the world around us?
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
The student selected three recognizably real-world objects and grounded each in a specific personal or observed context, which makes the exhibition concrete rather than generic.
The student's response shows a clear attempt to connect each object to a broader claim about how knowledge is accessed, interpreted, or limited within different communities.
The objects are varied and interesting, and the exhibition has a discernible line of inquiry rather than feeling like three unrelated examples.
Several claims are too broad or absolute for the evidence provided, especially around cultural exclusivity, musical literacy, and AI knowledge.
The justification for each object would be stronger with more specific object-level detail; in places, the commentary stays at the level of general explanation instead of analysing the actual object.
The Cleverbot section is conceptually the weakest because it confuses system opacity, human authorship, and knowledge ownership.
Some comparisons drift away from the objects themselves and weaken focus, making the links to the prompt less precise than they need to be for a higher band.