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IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) SL Theory of Knowledge Example
Coursework ExemplarSL
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B
Official IB Result
IB Grade: B
Criteria A: TOK Exhibition
6/10
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5
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Does the exhibition successfully show how TOK manifests in the world around us?
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student uses three clearly identifiable real-world objects with specific personal or family contexts, which makes the exhibition grounded and credible.
The student makes relevant TOK connections between the objects and the prompt by showing how language, music, and material culture carry knowledge and cultural meaning.
The student's examples show genuine engagement with the idea that knowledge can be preserved and transmitted across generations and communities.
Some explanations stay broad and need sharper focus on the exact knowledge claim each object is meant to show.
The discussion of the piano shifts at times from the object itself to jazz more generally, which weakens the precision of the link.
A few claims are asserted without enough supporting evidence, and one section is incomplete, which reduces the overall clarity of the argument.