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IB Theory of Knowledge (TOK) SL Theory of Knowledge Example
Banking app for middle schoolersSL
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C
Official IB Result
IB Grade: C
Criteria A: TOK Exhibition
4/10
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5
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Does the exhibition successfully show how TOK manifests in the world around us?
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
The student uses three specific real-world objects rather than generic examples, and the personal contexts make the exhibition feel grounded and authentic.
The student's chosen objects all connect clearly to the prompt, so the reader can see the intended line of inquiry from the beginning.
The exhibition shows a consistent attempt to compare different ways of understanding the world through everyday items.
The analysis is often too general and relies on broad definitions instead of close TOK examination of the objects.
Some claims are overly absolute, especially where the student presents knowledge as simply objective truth and treats fiction, maps, and measurements too narrowly.
Several points would be stronger with specific evidence from the objects rather than unsupported statements about what they represent.
The discussion sometimes personifies objects or simplifies their role, which weakens the quality of the conceptual analysis.