An investigation on the correlation between net transfer spending by English Premier League clubs in the 2022/23, 2023/24, and 2024/25 seasons and their total points.SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: A
Criteria A: TOK Exhibition
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Does the exhibition successfully show how TOK manifests in the world around us?
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student chose three specific, real-world objects and consistently grounded them in clear contexts.
- Each object is used to make a distinct and relevant point about the prompt, rather than repeating the same idea.
- The student's commentary shows strong conceptual thinking and connects the objects to broader ideas about experience, perspective, and knowledge.
- The student supports several claims with relevant references and shows awareness of how real-world examples can illuminate TOK ideas.
- A few claims are stated too absolutely and would be stronger if more carefully qualified.
- Some parts of the commentary move slightly beyond what the object itself securely supports.
- A little more precision in linking specific details of the objects to each claim would make the argument even more convincing.