The following text is a poem by David Okafor.
At the Hearing
You asked me what I was thinking. I'll tell you what I was thinking.
I was thinking about the kitchen light that flickers every Tuesday. 5 I was thinking about my daughter's recital, the way she held her bow as if it might escape her.
You asked me to describe events in order. I cannot describe events in order. 10 Events did not occur in order.
You have your forms and your version of sequence. You write as if I were a weather report.
I have been in rooms like this for thirty years.
You are very young. 15 You have very clean hands. I do not say this as an insult. I say it because I notice things, because noticing is how I have survived, because the difference between this room and other rooms 20 has always been the hands.
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How and to what effect is voice used in this text?
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Voice is the central force of Okafor’s poem because the poem is essentially a dramatic monologue in which a single speaker resists being controlled by an institutional listener. The speaker’s voice is shaped through direct address, refusal, observation and finally command, so that what begins as an answer at a formal “