To what extent do anthropogenic recreational activities at the beach aff ect the dissolved oxygen level thus aff ecting water quality through aerobic microbial respiration in the sea at Repulse Bay beach?HL
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6
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: A: Identification and analysis of formal qualities
5/6
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3
6
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A.1Identification and analysis of formal qualities
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student identifies a wide range of formal elements with confidence across all three works.
- The student's observations often move beyond description into meaning, especially when discussing scale, space, texture, and composition.
- The student shows strong awareness of how visual choices shape the viewer’s response.
- Some points become repetitive rather than building into a deeper line of analysis.
- A few technical terms could be more precise and consistently controlled.
- At times the student explains what a feature suggests without fully analysing how it creates that effect.
Criteria B: B: Analysis and understanding of function and purpose
5/6
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B.1Analysis and understanding of function and purpose
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student demonstrates a thorough understanding of why each work was made and what it is trying to do.
- The student connects function to specific visual choices rather than treating purpose as a separate abstract idea.
- The student shows awareness of contrasting cultural contexts and how these affect meaning.
- The student's analysis sometimes lists several purposes without clearly ranking which is most important.
- Some explanations stay broad, especially when discussing provocation, shock, or personal expression.
- The student could be more precise about how material and contextual choices shift a work’s purpose.
Criteria C: C: Analysis and evaluation of cultural significance
4/6
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C.1Analysis and evaluation of cultural significance
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Making comparisons and connections
4/6
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D.1Making comparisons and connections
Good
Criteria Feedback
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- Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
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- Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
Criteria E: E: Presentation and subject-specific language
4/6
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E.1Presentation and subject-specific language
Good
Criteria Feedback
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- Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
- Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
- Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
Criteria F: F: Making connections to own art-making practice (HL)
9/12
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12
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F.1Making connections to own art-making practice
Good
Criteria Feedback
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- Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
- Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
- Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.