How can ergonomic factors influence the design of a multipurpose makeup handle to improve inclusivity for consumers with physical disabilities in their hands?HL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: A: Identification and analysis of formal qualities
5/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Identification and analysis of formal qualities
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student sustains artwork-specific discussion across all three works and connects formal choices to meaning.
- The student explains how colour, lighting, composition, scale and material shape the viewer’s response.
- The student shows clear perceptive moments where visual decisions are tied to themes of loss, memory and cultural transition.
- At times the student's interpretations become too certain without enough visual or contextual support.
- Some points repeat similar ideas instead of developing a more nuanced formal argument.
- A few claims would be stronger if the student distinguished more clearly between what is visible and what is inferred.
Criteria B: B: Analysis and understanding of function and purpose
5/6
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3
6
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B.1Analysis and understanding of function and purpose
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student shows a clear understanding that the works serve different purposes in different cultural contexts.
- The student connects visual features to audience response and social meaning in a thoughtful way.
- The student uses artist intention and contextual discussion to support several of their purpose statements.
- Some claims about purpose remain broad or speculative rather than securely evidenced.
- At points, the analysis moves too quickly from visual observation to conclusions about political or social messages.
- The student would strengthen this further by separating documented intention from their own interpretation more clearly.
Criteria C: C: Analysis and evaluation of cultural significance
5/6
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3
6
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C.1Analysis and evaluation of cultural significance
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Making comparisons and connections
4/6
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3
6
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D.1Making comparisons and connections
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: E: Presentation and subject-specific language
5/6
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3
6
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E.1Presentation and subject-specific language
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: F: Making connections to own art-making practice (HL)
6/12
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6
12
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Making connections to own art-making practice
Good
Criteria Feedback
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- Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
- Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
- Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.