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IB Sports, exercise and health science (SEHS) SL Internal Assessment Example
What is the difference between the effects of a static or dynamic 10-minute warm-up routine on lower hamstring flexibility (measured in cm using the sit and reach test) among individuals aged 16-17?SL
Overall Score: 14/24
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Criteria A: Personal Engagement
1/2
0
1
2
Criteria Strands
A.1Evidence of personal engagement and independent thinking
Moderate
A.2Justification and personal significance
Excellent
A.3Personal input and initiative
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
You connected the investigation to your own ballet background, which gave the study a clear personal purpose.
You showed initiative by including participant consent and risk information alongside the main report.
The design choices mostly follow a standard classroom pattern, so there is limited evidence of original independent thinking.
Your protocol would be stronger if the exact warm-up routines and rationale for key choices were explained more clearly.
Criteria B: Exploration
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Research question focus and relevance
Excellent
B.2Background information quality
Good
B.3Methodology appropriateness
Good
B.4Safety and ethical considerations
Good
Criteria Feedback
Your research question is clear, focused, and directly linked to the variables being tested.
Your background information is relevant overall and gives the reader a useful foundation for the investigation.
Your method is mostly suitable for exploring the effect of a short warm-up on flexibility.
You show awareness of ethics and safety through consent, voluntary participation, and risk awareness.
Some of the background becomes broader than the investigation needs and does not always stay tightly linked to the exact question.
The warm-up procedures are not described in enough detail to be fully reproducible.
Safety controls could be more complete, especially around screening, stop conditions, and stretching intensity.
The method would be stronger if more operational detail were included for variables such as temperature and standardisation.
Criteria C: Analysis
3/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
C.1Raw data quality and quantity
Good
C.2Data processing and accuracy
Good
C.3Consideration of measurement uncertainty
Good
C.4Data interpretation and conclusion validity
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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Criteria D: Evaluation
2/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion relevance and support
Good
D.2Comparison to scientific context
Good
D.3Discussion of limitations and errors
Good
D.4Suggestions for improvement
Good
Criteria Feedback
Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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Criteria E: Communication
4/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
E.1Clarity of presentation
Excellent
E.2Structure and organization
Excellent
E.3Focus and relevance
Excellent
E.4Use of terminology and conventions
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, consectetur adipiscing elit, sed do eiusmod tempor incididunt ut labore et dolore magna aliqua.
Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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