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IB Sports, exercise and health science (SEHS) HL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent does the height (± 0.5 cm) of a professional golf player who has participated in the 2022-23 season of their respective golf tours (PGA Tour, DP World Tour, and LIV Golf ) affect their average driving distance? (± 1.5 yards)HL
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Overall Score: 15/24
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Criteria A: Personal Engagement
2/2
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1
2
Criteria Strands
A.1Evidence of personal engagement and independent thinking
Excellent
A.2Justification and personal significance
Excellent
A.3Personal input and initiative
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Clear personal significance established through family background and golfing aspirations
Independent selection of height bands, statistical tests, and qualitative observations
Sustained initiative evident in bespoke data compilation and narrative positioning
Duplicate entry for participant 39 in processed data table introduces potential bias
Criteria B: Exploration
3/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Research question focus and relevance
Moderate
B.2Background information quality
Moderate
B.3Methodology appropriateness
Moderate
B.4Safety and ethical considerations
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Research question is relevant and focused on height versus driving distance
Background integrates biomechanical theory and tour statistics
Methodology outlines variables, statistical tests, and confounders
Ethical considerations address anonymity and minimal safety concerns
Question wording is verbose and could be more concise
Several biomechanical claims lack proper academic citations
Data-usage permissions and exclusion criteria for incomplete records are not specified
Ethics discussion omits issues of data-source permissions
Criteria C: Analysis
3/6
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3
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Criteria Strands
C.1Raw data quality and quantity
Moderate
C.2Data processing and accuracy
Moderate
C.3Consideration of measurement uncertainty
Moderate
C.4Data interpretation and conclusion validity
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
3/6
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3
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Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion relevance and support
Moderate
D.2Comparison to scientific context
Moderate
D.3Discussion of limitations and errors
Moderate
D.4Suggestions for improvement
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Communication
4/4
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2
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Criteria Strands
E.1Clarity of presentation
Good
E.2Structure and organization
Good
E.3Focus and relevance
Good
E.4Use of terminology and conventions
Good
Criteria Feedback
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