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IB Sports, exercise and health science (SEHS) HL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent does engagement with first-person shooter (FPS) games impact the reaction time of male students in grades 6-9 compared to those who primarily engage with non-FPS games?HL
Overall Score: 13/24
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Criteria A: Personal Engagement
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria Strands
A.1Evidence of personal engagement and independent thinking
Excellent
A.2Justification and personal significance
Excellent
A.3Personal input and initiative
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Clear connection of personal gaming experience to investigation design
Sustained independent thinking in choice of topic and methodology
Personal initiative demonstrated through consent procedures and equipment management
Could expand the VR extension with concrete feasibility details
Criteria B: Exploration
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Research question focus and relevance
Moderate
B.2Background information quality
Moderate
B.3Methodology appropriateness
Moderate
B.4Safety and ethical considerations
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Research question is relevant and largely focused with defined variables
Background draws on academic sources and links FPS gaming to cognition
Methodology includes detailed control-variable table and consent procedures
Ethical and safety considerations such as anonymisation and equipment hygiene are addressed
Engagement metric not quantified, equating genre preference to engagement
Background coverage is brief and partly anecdotal
Method lacks randomisation and test validity checks
Minor omissions in fatigue and web-latency discussions
Criteria C: Analysis
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
C.1Raw data quality and quantity
Moderate
C.2Data processing and accuracy
Moderate
C.3Consideration of measurement uncertainty
Poor
C.4Data interpretation and conclusion validity
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion relevance and support
Moderate
D.2Comparison to scientific context
Moderate
D.3Discussion of limitations and errors
Moderate
D.4Suggestions for improvement
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Communication
2/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
E.1Clarity of presentation
Good
E.2Structure and organization
Good
E.3Focus and relevance
Good
E.4Use of terminology and conventions
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
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