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IB Sports, exercise and health science (SEHS) HL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent does consuming ‘Red Bull’ energy drink effect
the heart rate (BPM) and systolic and diastolic blood pressure (kpa) of
16-17 years old elite athletes immediately after consumption?HL
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Overall Score: 16/24
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Criteria A: Personal Engagement
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria Strands
A.1Evidence of personal engagement and independent thinking
Excellent
A.2Justification and personal significance
Excellent
A.3Personal input and initiative
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Genuine linkage of investigation to personal dance practice and caffeine use
Evidence of independent initiative in designing forms, recruiting participants, and implementing repeated trials
Clear articulation of personal significance and curiosity regarding Red Bull consumption
Criteria B: Exploration
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Research question focus and relevance
Moderate
B.2Background information quality
Good
B.3Methodology appropriateness
Moderate
B.4Safety and ethical considerations
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Relevant and mostly focused research question supported by extensive literature review
Comprehensive background on caffeine pharmacokinetics and related studies
Some awareness of safety and ethical considerations via PAR-Q and parental consent
Imprecise phrasing of the research question and inconsistent units (kPa vs mmHg)
Methodology lacks placebo control, randomization, and thorough ethical safeguards (side-effect monitoring, data privacy)
Confounders table is truncated and procedural details (timer accuracy, randomization) are incomplete
Criteria C: Analysis
4/6
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3
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Criteria Strands
C.1Raw data quality and quantity
Good
C.2Data processing and accuracy
Moderate
C.3Consideration of measurement uncertainty
Moderate
C.4Data interpretation and conclusion validity
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion relevance and support
Moderate
D.2Comparison to scientific context
Moderate
D.3Discussion of limitations and errors
Good
D.4Suggestions for improvement
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
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Criteria E: Communication
3/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
E.1Clarity of presentation
Good
E.2Structure and organization
Good
E.3Focus and relevance
Good
E.4Use of terminology and conventions
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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