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IB Sports, exercise and health science (SEHS) SL Internal Assessment Example
To What Extent Does Body Composition as measured by BMI (kg/m^2, ± 1.01) affect Reaction Time (ms, ± 30ms) in 16-17 year olds from England in July 2024?SL
Overall Score: 14/24
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Criteria A: Personal Engagement
1/2
0
1
2
Criteria Strands
A.1Evidence of personal engagement and independent thinking
Moderate
A.2Justification and personal significance
Moderate
A.3Personal input and initiative
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Engaging personal cricket anecdote demonstrating interest
Some initiative shown in volunteer sampling and control table design
Use of standard online tests and BMI formula shows limited independent thinking
Justification is largely generic with little deep personal significance
Personal input evident but not sustained innovation or adaptation
Criteria B: Exploration
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
B.1Research question focus and relevance
Moderate
B.2Background information quality
Moderate
B.3Methodology appropriateness
Moderate
B.4Safety and ethical considerations
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Background information is mainly appropriate and draws on various studies
Methodology is described in sufficient detail for replication
Awareness of safety and ethical considerations is evident
Research question addresses population, IV and DV clearly
Background includes digressions that dilute focus
Key methodological limitations (e.g., computer lag) are noted but not controlled
Research question wording is overly lengthy and embeds unnecessary detail
Ethical approval and deeper ethical implications are not fully considered
Criteria C: Analysis
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
C.1Raw data quality and quantity
Excellent
C.2Data processing and accuracy
Good
C.3Consideration of measurement uncertainty
Moderate
C.4Data interpretation and conclusion validity
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Evaluation
3/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
D.1Conclusion relevance and support
Moderate
D.2Comparison to scientific context
Moderate
D.3Discussion of limitations and errors
Moderate
D.4Suggestions for improvement
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Communication
3/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
E.1Clarity of presentation
Good
E.2Structure and organization
Good
E.3Focus and relevance
Good
E.4Use of terminology and conventions
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
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