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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: Criterion A: Introduction
5/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Aim or research question
Excellent
A.2Real-life problem
Good
A.3Findings and conclusions of research
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student states a clear, focused research question with a specific group, setting, and context.
- The student uses two relevant pieces of research and connects them to their topic.
- The student's introduction gives the reader a coherent rationale for why the investigation matters.
- The explanations of the two research studies are still mostly descriptive rather than fully analytical.
- The link between the research background and the exact assessment-week focus could be made more explicit.
- The impact on the population of interest is present, but it is not developed in enough depth.
Criteria B: Criterion B: Research methodology
5/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Research method choice
Excellent
B.2Procedure
Excellent
B.3Ethical considerations
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student clearly explains why semi-structured interviews are suitable for their question.
- The student's procedure is logically organised, from sampling and piloting through to recording and transcription.
- The student addresses several relevant ethical issues and connects them directly to the investigation.
- The student shows awareness of consent, privacy, withdrawal, and possible distress.
- A few procedural details could be even more precise, especially around recruitment timing and data handling.
- The student could link some ethical decisions more explicitly to the specific risks created by the school context.
- The student's comparison of methods is good, but it could be broadened a little further.
Criteria C: Criterion C: Data collection
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Data collection tool
Excellent
C.2Decisions made when creating the tool
Good
C.3Potential challenges
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Criterion D: Discussion
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Potential findings and implications
Good
D.2Researcher bias
Excellent
D.3Additional research method
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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