To what extent is the lethal control of wild animal populations morally justified in order to protect human safety in the anthropocentric perspective?HL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Identification of Issue and Justification
3/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Issue identification
Excellent
A.2Connection justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- You identify the ethical problem explicitly and keep it tightly focused on the morality of state-led lethal control.
- You clearly explain why the stimulus raises a genuine philosophical tension rather than just a policy dispute.
- You define the scope of the issue well, which helps the investigation stay precise and manageable.
- The framing is strong, but it could be sharpened even further by making the key terms and moral stakes even more concise at the start.
- A slightly more direct final statement of the exact issue would make the opening even more forceful.
Criteria B: Clarity
3/4
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4
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B.1Structure
Excellent
B.2Organization
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- Your argument is well organised and progresses in a logical sequence from issue-setting to theory, comparison, counterargument, and conclusion.
- Your signposting makes the line of reasoning easy to follow.
- The essay remains coherent throughout, and the reader can usually see why each paragraph comes next.
- Some sentences are longer than necessary and could be tightened for greater readability.
- A few transitions could be smoother, especially when moving from theoretical claims into the final judgement.
Criteria C: Knowledge and Understanding
4/4
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4
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C.1Knowledge demonstration
Good
C.2Philosophical vocabulary
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Analysis
8/8
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4
8
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D.1Analytical depth
Good
D.2Use of examples
Good
D.3Counter-arguments
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Evaluation
6/6
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3
6
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E.1Alternative viewpoints
Excellent
E.2Justification
Excellent
E.3Conclusion
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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