The Perfect Dive: Optimising Goalkeeper Diving Strategy to Save PenaltiesHL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Presentation
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Coherence and logical development
Good
A.2Organization and structure
Good
A.3Conciseness and relevance
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student's report is clearly structured with a strong introduction, developed body, and conclusion.
- The mathematical journey is easy to follow because each main stage leads logically into the next.
- Most sections stay relevant to the modelling aim and support the investigation well.
- Some sections include repetitive or descriptive material that does not add much to the argument.
- A few transitions rely on visual impression rather than a fully transparent mathematical method.
- The final layout is good, but not consistently seamless because of issues such as a blank page and dense figures.
Criteria B: Mathematical Communication
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Mathematical language and notation
Good
B.2Multiple representations
Good
B.3Clarity and consistency
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student uses a wide range of appropriate mathematical language and symbolism.
- Tables, graphs, vectors, matrices, and equations are generally presented clearly.
- The student's explanations usually help the reader understand what each result means in context.
- Some terminology is imprecise, such as calling a two-dimensional region a surface area.
- A few notation choices and angle labels are inconsistent or hard to verify.
- Some diagrams are crowded, so the mathematical meaning is not always immediately clear.
Criteria C: Personal Engagement
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Independent thinking
Good
C.2Personal approach
Good
C.3Creativity and initiative
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Reflection
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Depth of reflection
Good
D.2Critical analysis
Good
D.3Connection to understanding
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Use of Mathematics
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Relevance and level
Good
E.2Accuracy and correctness
Poor
E.3Knowledge and understanding
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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