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IB Mathematics Analysis and Approaches (AA) HL Internal Assessment Example
How does the initial radius and the rate of change impact the height of stacked hemispherical bubbles?HL
Overall Score: 17/20
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Criteria A: Presentation
3/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
A.1Coherence and logical development
Good
A.2Organization and structure
Good
A.3Conciseness and relevance
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
The exploration follows a clear logical development, with each section (introduction → proof → checking → extension → conclusion) building sensibly on what precedes it.
Good use of headings, numbered equations and labelled figures provides a recognisable and navigable structure.
Most of the content is directly relevant to the central question, maintaining reader focus on the key arguments.
Several passages are verbose or contain unnecessary repetition, interrupting the flow.
Occasional duplication of images and a few misplaced paragraphs (eg. lengthy coordinate lists) prevent truly seamless organization.
Some tables and figures (eg. the table for n≤10, low‐resolution screenshots) lack clarity or proper labelling, reducing conciseness.
Criteria B: Mathematical Communication
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
B.1Mathematical language and notation
Good
B.2Multiple representations
Good
B.3Logical structure and clarity
Good
Criteria Feedback
Variables and indices are defined clearly, and the student employs precise mathematical notation throughout most of the exploration.
A broad range of representations (algebraic derivations, labelled diagrams, data tables and GeoGebra graphs) are integrated effectively and interpreted in the text.
Logical structure is strong: premises are stated, equations are numbered and conclusions are drawn explicitly, yielding clear mathematical communication.
There are a few minor notational inconsistencies (eg. switching between R1 and R_1) and missing differentials in derivative expressions.
Occasional mis-numbered equations and abrupt algebraic jumps slightly obscure the chain of reasoning.
Some screenshots and figures could be better labelled to strengthen the link between representation and analysis.
Criteria C: Personal Engagement
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
C.1Independent thinking
Good
C.2Personal approach
Good
C.3Creativity and initiative
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Reflection
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria Strands
D.1Depth of reflection
Good
D.2Critical analysis
Good
D.3Evaluation of outcomes
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Use of Mathematics
6/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
E.1Relevance of mathematics
Good
E.2Level appropriateness
Excellent
E.3Understanding and accuracy
Good
Criteria Feedback
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