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IB Mathematics Analysis and Approaches (AA) HL Internal Assessment Example
How do blood glucose kinetics differ between a diabetic and a non-diabetic
individual? Modelling blood glucose concentration curves through the application of
interpolation techniquesHL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Presentation
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Coherence and logical development
Good
A.2Organization and structure
Excellent
A.3Conciseness and relevance
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Your exploration is very clearly structured, with a strong introduction, logically ordered body sections, and a conclusion that helps the reader follow the investigation.
Most of the material stays focused on the investigation aim, and your tables, figures, and captions support the flow of the work well.
You use sectioning effectively to separate data collection, modelling, comparison, and evaluation.
Some sections repeat similar discussion for multiple models, which reduces conciseness.
A few transition points would be stronger if you made the decision criteria for moving between models more explicit.
Minor formatting and numbering issues slightly interrupt the otherwise strong organization.
Criteria B: Mathematical Communication
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Mathematical language and notation
Moderate
B.2Multiple representations
Good
B.3Logical structure and clarity
Good
Criteria Feedback
You use a good range of mathematical language, including function notation, derivatives, integrals, parameters, and fit statistics.
You include multiple meaningful representations such as tables, graphs, model comparisons, and derivative displays.
Your explanations generally help the reader understand what each calculation is doing and why it matters.
Some notation is inconsistent or not fully standard, especially in the parameter tables and derivative expressions.
A few graphs and labels could communicate units and meaning more clearly.
In the more advanced calculus sections, some steps are not shown clearly enough to verify every detail with confidence.
Criteria C: Personal Engagement
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Independent thinking
Good
C.2Personal approach
Good
C.3Creativity and initiative
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Reflection
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Depth of reflection
Good
D.2Critical analysis
Good
D.3Evaluation of outcomes
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Use of Mathematics (HL)
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Relevance and level
Good
F.2Accuracy and correctness
Poor
F.3Knowledge and understanding
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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