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IB Mathematics Analysis and Approaches (AA) HL Internal Assessment Example
Calculating the volume of a carafeHL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Presentation
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Coherence and logical development
Good
A.2Organization and structure
Excellent
A.3Conciseness and relevance
Good
Criteria Feedback
You present the investigation with a clear title page, introduction, methods, conclusion, and references, which makes the work easy to follow.
Your figures, captions, headings, and page numbering create a strong visual structure and help the reader move through the exploration smoothly.
Most of the content stays focused on the carafe’s capacity and supports the central aim of the investigation.
A few sections include more explanation than necessary, especially repeated formula descriptions and extended algebra.
Some parts of the argument would be clearer if repetitive worked details were compressed into tables or shorter summaries.
There are a few places where the flow weakens because later numerical reporting is not fully consistent with earlier calculations.
Criteria B: Mathematical Communication
4/4
0
2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Mathematical language and notation
Good
B.2Multiple representations
Excellent
B.3Logical structure and clarity
Good
Criteria Feedback
You use appropriate mathematical language and notation for most of the exploration, including coordinates, functions, integrals, units, and percentage error.
You make effective use of several representations, including photographs, annotated diagrams, regression plots, tables, and algebraic derivations.
Your communication is generally logical, with variables introduced before they are used and figures referenced where needed.
Some notation becomes crowded or difficult to follow when several similar boundary functions are introduced close together.
A few expressions are transcribed unclearly, which makes it harder for the reader to track exactly which curve or interval is being used.
The final summary would be stronger if every reported numerical result matched the values obtained earlier in the exploration.
Criteria C: Personal Engagement
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Independent thinking
Excellent
C.2Personal approach
Excellent
C.3Creativity and initiative
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Reflection
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Depth of reflection
Good
D.2Critical analysis
Good
D.3Evaluation of outcomes
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Use of Mathematics (HL)
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Relevance and level
Excellent
F.2Accuracy and correctness
Poor
F.3Knowledge and understanding
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.