To what extent did the breakdown of the “Interim Agreement for Peace and Self-Government in Kosovo” (Rambouillet Agreement) contribute to NATO’s decision to intervene in Kosovo in 1999?HL
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Overall Score
20/25
Criteria A: Identification and evaluation of sources
5/6
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3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Research question formulation
Excellent
A.2Source selection and relevance
Excellent
A.3Source analysis and evaluation
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- Your research question is precise, focused, and clearly historical in scope.
- You selected two highly relevant sources that complement each other well.
- You evaluated source value and limitation with clear attention to origin, purpose, and content.
- Your evaluation of the later historical source could be more specific about how its expertise affects particular claims.
- Some parts of the analysis would be stronger if you quoted or interrogated the source more closely.
- A few evaluative points are a little formulaic and could be developed with more precise evidence.
Criteria B: Investigation
12/15
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8
15
Criteria Strands
B.1Organization and clarity
Good
B.2Critical analysis and evidence use
Good
B.3Perspective evaluation and conclusion
Good
Criteria Feedback
- Your argument is sustained and clearly focused on causation rather than simple narrative.
- You use a range of evidence to support your explanation and keep the investigation logically sequenced.
- You show awareness of different perspectives and return to the question with a reasoned conclusion.
- At times you move from evidence to conclusion too quickly, especially when judging how decisive Rambouillet was.
- Some counterarguments are addressed too briefly and are not tested directly against the agreement or decision-making evidence.
- There is some repetition in the writing, and the final judgement would be stronger if you ranked the relative importance of the factors more explicitly.
Criteria C: Reflection
3/4
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2
4
Criteria Strands
C.1Methods reflection
Excellent
C.2Historical challenges awareness
Excellent
C.3Connection to investigation
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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