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IB History SL Internal Assessment Example
¿En qué medida las tensiones de la Guerra Fría y la presión internacional
influyeron en la creación del Tratado de Prohibición Parcial de Ensayos
Nucleares de 1963?SL
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Overall Score
16/25
Criteria A: Identification and evaluation of sources
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria Strands
A.1Research question formulation
Excellent
A.2Source selection and relevance
Excellent
A.3Source analysis and evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
You state a clear, focused research question with a bounded historical frame.
You choose relevant sources that fit the inquiry and explain why each one matters.
You evaluate the sources using origin, purpose, content, value, and limitation rather than only summarizing them.
Some of the source evaluation is still a little general and would benefit from sharper source-specific detail.
The usefulness of the treaty text for explaining causes could be justified more directly.
There is some imprecision in how the provenance and perspective of the sources are described.
Criteria B: Investigation
8/15
0
8
15
Criteria Strands
B.1Organization and clarity
Moderate
B.2Critical analysis and evidence use
Moderate
B.3Perspective evaluation and conclusion
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
Your investigation is generally clear, coherent, and logically structured.
You develop an argument that weighs different causes rather than simply narrating events.
You use evidence from a range of material to support your explanation and connect it back to the question.
Some parts of the analysis remain descriptive and need more explicit explanation of how the evidence proves the claim.
The comparison between different causes could be weighed more sharply in the conclusion.
There is some repetition, and a few pieces of evidence are not interrogated as closely as they could be.
Criteria C: Reflection
3/4
0
2
4
Criteria Strands
C.1Methods reflection
Good
C.2Historical challenges awareness
Good
C.3Connection to investigation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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