What are the obstacles faced by the strategies implemented in the protection of girls and women from Female Genital Mutilation in Kenya?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: A: Explanation and justification
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Explanation and justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student clearly identifies a focused and politically significant issue.
- The student explains why the issue matters through human-rights concerns and the Kenyan context.
- The student justifies the project well by linking the engagement activities directly to the research question.
- The opening could be tightened so the Kenyan focus is established sooner.
- A little more precision in framing the scope would make the justification even sharper.
Criteria B: B: Process
2/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Process
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student shows a thoughtful and ethical engagement process, including consent and sensitivity to the topic.
- The student includes a range of perspectives from community, government-linked, and civil-society actors.
- The student integrates the engagements into the later discussion rather than treating them as isolated activities.
- The sequence of the activities could be explained more explicitly.
- The process would be even stronger if the student briefly justified why each engagement happened in that order.
Criteria C: C: Analysis and synthesis
4/8
0
4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Analysis and synthesis
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Evaluation and reflection
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Evaluation and reflection
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: E: Communication
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Communication
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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