Violation of civil and political rights in Kenya RQ: To what extent have NGOs and state agencies been effective in promoting civil and political rights in Kenya?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: A: Explanation and justification
2/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Explanation and justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student clearly identifies a relevant political issue and explains why it matters in a real Kenyan context.
- The student connects the project to course ideas such as power, the state, and human rights.
- The student justifies the choice of engagement activities with appropriate links to the research question.
- The student's justification would be even stronger if they explained more precisely why this issue is urgent now.
- The student could say more about why these specific organisations were the most suitable choices.
- Some links between the project focus and later analysis could be made more explicit.
Criteria B: B: Process
1/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Process
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student used a range of meaningful engagement methods, including interviews, a local survey, and participation in an advocacy programme.
- The student's process shows initiative and a genuine attempt to gather both institutional and community perspectives.
- The evidence base has breadth, which supports a rounded investigation.
- The student does not give enough methodological detail about the survey or how respondents were selected.
- The interview process is not explained in enough depth to show how evidence was collected and assessed.
- The different research outputs are not fully integrated or compared in a systematic way.
Criteria C: C: Analysis and synthesis
6/8
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4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Analysis and synthesis
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Evaluation and reflection
4/6
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3
6
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D.1Evaluation and reflection
Poor
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Criteria E: E: Communication
3/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Communication
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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