To what extent have Hezbollah’s dual political and military roles, from the 2019 Lebanese protests to the 2023 Hamas-Israel conflict, challenged Lebanon’s sovereignty and government legitimacy?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: A: Identification of issue and justification
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A.1Identification of issue and justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student states a clear political issue from the start and keeps it focused throughout the piece.
- The student connects the topic convincingly to key global politics ideas such as sovereignty, legitimacy, state authority, and non-state actors.
- The student's personal connection to the issue makes the choice of engagement purposeful and credible.
- The student shows awareness of the limits of their engagement design, which strengthens the rationale behind their choice.
- The student could explain more clearly why these specific interviewees were the best possible way to explore the issue.
- The justification would be even stronger if the student mapped each viewpoint directly onto the research question in a more explicit way.
Criteria B: B: Explanation of the engagement
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B.1Explanation of the engagement
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student describes the engagement clearly and makes it relevant to the political issue they are investigating.
- The student goes beyond summary at times by interpreting what the interviews revealed about the complexity of support for Hezbollah.
- The student identifies a meaningful limitation in the range of perspectives, showing reflective awareness of what the engagement did and did not capture.
- The student shows that the experience contributed to a more nuanced understanding of the issue rather than simply providing information.
- At times, the writing leans more toward reporting what interviewees said than explaining what the student learned from the engagement.
- The student's reflection would be stronger if they stated more explicitly how their thinking changed after the interviews.
- The student could deepen the explanation by showing how the absence of other perspectives affected their understanding of the issue.
Criteria C: C: Analysis of issue
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C.1Analysis of issue
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Synthesis and evaluation
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D.1Synthesis and evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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