To what extent does public funding of NGO-run food banks in Poland shift responsibility for welfare provision away from the state?SL
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6
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: A: Explanation and justification
3/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Explanation and justification
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student identified a clear and focused political issue and kept it visible throughout the report.
- The student explained why the engagement activities were relevant to the question and linked them to useful political concepts.
- The student showed a sound understanding of the difference between formal responsibility and practical delivery.
- Some parts of the justification remain a little descriptive rather than fully analytical.
- The suitability of the chosen activities could be explained more explicitly in relation to the exact question being asked.
- A fuller rationale for why these specific sources and activities could answer the issue would strengthen the section.
Criteria B: B: Process
2/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Process
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student carried out substantial first-hand engagement through the food drive.
- The student selected interviewees with direct practical knowledge of NGO operations.
- The student used more than one source of evidence, which adds some internal comparison.
- The process would be stronger if it included a wider range of perspectives beyond the NGO network.
- The link between the engagement and the research question is not always made systematically enough.
- The report would benefit from clearer explanation of how each piece of evidence was gathered and used.
Criteria C: C: Analysis and synthesis
5/8
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4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Analysis and synthesis
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Evaluation and reflection
3/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Evaluation and reflection
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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- Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
- Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
- Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.
Criteria E: E: Communication
2/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Communication
Good
Criteria Feedback
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- Ut enim ad minim veniam, quis nostrud exercitation ullamco laboris nisi ut aliquip ex ea commodo consequat.
- Duis aute irure dolor in reprehenderit in voluptate velit esse cillum dolore eu fugiat nulla pariatur.
- Excepteur sint occaecat cupidatat non proident, sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollit anim id est laborum.