To what extent do non-government organisations (NGOs) fulfill government responsibilities in educating rural communities to minimise the impacts of poverty and inequalities?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: A: Identification of issue and justification
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A.1Identification of issue and justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student states a specific political issue clearly and keeps the focus on rural education in Romania.
- The student explains well why this issue matters to them personally, which makes the choice of engagement purposeful.
- The student connects the topic to relevant global politics ideas such as legitimacy, power, and development.
- The student could define more precisely what political change or improvement they mean by “lasting change.”
- Some links between the issue and the different levels of analysis could be made more explicit.
- The justification would be even stronger if the method chosen were tied more directly to the evidence the student expected to gather.
Criteria B: B: Explanation of the engagement
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B.1Explanation of the engagement
Excellent
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- The student describes their placement and tasks clearly, so the reader can see what the engagement involved.
- The student explains what they learned from the experience rather than only listing activities.
- The student shows reflection on the limits of NGO work, especially around funding, scale, and sustainability.
- Some parts of the reflection remain close to description rather than fully unpacking political learning.
- The student could explain more explicitly how each activity revealed something about the relationship between NGOs and the state.
- The learning from the interviews would be stronger if each source’s contribution were stated more directly.
Criteria C: C: Analysis of issue
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C.1Analysis of issue
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Criteria D: D: Synthesis and evaluation
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D.1Synthesis and evaluation
Good
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