To what extent are the garment workers in the Pakistani fashion industry subjected to exploitation, and how do the political and economic factors contribute to this?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 5
Criteria A: A: Identification of issue and justification
4/4
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Identification of issue and justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student states a clear political issue and keeps the focus tightly on garment-worker exploitation and the political-economic forces behind it.
- The student's personal motivation is convincing and feels authentic, which makes the topic matter beyond a generic academic choice.
- The student connects the issue well to Global Politics ideas such as human rights, development, and power relations.
- The student could explain more precisely why modernization theory is the most relevant lens for the issue.
- The student's justification would be even stronger if they clarified why this issue was the best choice compared with broader labour or consumer-ethics questions.
Criteria B: B: Explanation of the engagement
3/4
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B.1Explanation of the engagement
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student describes a relevant and purposeful engagement by visiting a factory and interviewing both workers and a designer.
- The student's choice of participants shows good planning because it brings together different perspectives on the same issue.
- The student reflects on what they learned about wages, workplace conditions, gender roles, and workers’ awareness of rights.
- The student's reflection on how the engagement changed their understanding is still quite general and would benefit from more specific examples.
- The student should explain more clearly which interview response was most surprising or significant and why.
- The engagement would be stronger if the student named the exact assumption that changed after the interviews.
Criteria C: C: Analysis of issue
4/6
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C.1Analysis of issue
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Synthesis and evaluation
1/6
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D.1Synthesis and evaluation
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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