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IB Global Politics SL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent are property owners in Italy able to defend their rights to property in cases of illegal house occupations?SL
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6
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: A: Explanation and justification
4/4
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2
4
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Explanation and justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The student clearly identifies a political issue and explains it through competing rights, power, justice, and the role of the state.
The student's personal rationale is persuasive because it connects a family experience to a broader political question without becoming purely anecdotal.
The two interviews are relevant and well chosen to provide contrasting perspectives on the issue.
The issue label could be made even more precise and academically framed.
The student could state more explicitly what each engagement was meant to reveal beyond the broad aim of hearing different viewpoints.
A little more explicit signposting of why the project is suitable would strengthen the justification further.
Criteria B: B: Process
2/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Process
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student uses two relevant interviews with contrasting perspectives, which gives the investigation a purposeful structure.
The student supports the engagement with a range of written sources, showing that the research was not limited to opinion alone.
The interview evidence is used later in the report rather than being left as isolated activity.
The report does not show clearly how the interviews were prepared, conducted, or refined through research.
There is little evidence of an iterative process in which one engagement shaped the next stage of investigation.
The process would be stronger if the student explained how claims from the interviews were checked against authoritative evidence.
Criteria C: C: Analysis and synthesis
5/8
0
4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Analysis and synthesis
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Evaluation and reflection
2/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Evaluation and reflection
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: E: Communication
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Communication
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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