To what extent are non-governmental organizations effective in reducing child sexual abuse in Kakamega County, Kenya?SL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: A: Identification of issue and justification
4/4
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Identification of issue and justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student states a focused and genuinely political issue with a clear local context.
- The student's personal motivation for choosing the topic is convincing and makes the inquiry feel purposeful.
- The student connects the issue well to Global Politics ideas such as rights, power, development, and institutions.
- A few theoretical references could be linked more directly to this specific issue.
- The justification for why Kakamega County is the best site could be more concrete and specific.
Criteria B: B: Explanation of the engagement
4/4
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4
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B.1Explanation of the engagement
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student describes several relevant engagements that directly support their investigation.
- The student explains what they learned from the experiences, not just what they did.
- The student's active involvement, especially in awareness work, shows real engagement with the issue.
- Some reflections would be stronger if the student separated observation from personal opinion more clearly.
- A few points about impact would be more convincing if the student showed evidence of what changed as a result of the engagement.
Criteria C: C: Analysis of issue
4/6
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C.1Analysis of issue
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Synthesis and evaluation
3/6
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D.1Synthesis and evaluation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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