How do different actors influence the health and well-being of Polish citizens in terms of combating nicotine addiction on a local and national level?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 5
Criteria A: A: Identification of issue and justification
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A.1Identification of issue and justification
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- The student identifies a clear political issue and makes their personal reason for choosing it easy to understand.
- The student connects nicotine addiction to governance, power, inequality, and public policy rather than treating it as only a health topic.
- The student shows a relevant link between their lived experience and the wider political question they investigate.
- The student's opening could be even sharper if they named the political tension more explicitly from the start.
- The wording of the issue is a little broader than the exact question the student later investigates.
- The student could make the specific Global Politics relevance more precise by stating the policy conflict more directly.
Criteria B: B: Explanation of the engagement
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B.1Explanation of the engagement
Good
Criteria Feedback
- The student describes several meaningful engagements that give them access to different perspectives on the issue.
- The student's interview with a practitioner is especially valuable because it adds informed insight into addiction prevention and support.
- The student explains several ways the engagement changed or deepened their understanding, rather than just listing what they did.
- Some of the student's reflection stays focused on personal awareness and health rather than political understanding.
- The student could explain more clearly what the engagement revealed about policy, power, or the roles of different actors.
- The political implications of what the student learned are present, but they are not developed as fully as they could be.
Criteria C: C: Analysis of issue
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C.1Analysis of issue
Moderate
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Criteria D: D: Synthesis and evaluation
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D.1Synthesis and evaluation
Moderate
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