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IB Geography HL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent is sand dune formation in Mambrui, Kilifi County affected by wind speed,vegetation cover, and soil pH?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Criterion A: Fieldwork Question and Geographic Context
3/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Fieldwork question formulation and relevance
Excellent
A.2Geographic context and location specificity
Excellent
A.3Mapping and spatial representation
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The student's investigation is clearly geographically grounded in a precise coastal location, with coordinates and a 500 m transect that make the fieldwork feasible.
The question is well linked to geographical theory, especially aeolian transport and psammosere succession, and it supports hypothesis formation.
The student's maps follow key conventions and provide strong locational context, moving from the national scale to the specific study area.
The dependent idea of sand dune formation is not operationalised in the data the student actually collects, so the question is stronger than the evidence base.
The local map would be more useful if it showed the exact transect and sampling points rather than only the general dune area.
Criteria B: Criterion B: Methods of Investigation
2/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Method description and relevance
Good
B.2Data collection techniques and implementation
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student describes a range of relevant fieldwork techniques, including a transect, quadrats, pH measurement, and wind-speed sampling.
Several procedures are explained with enough detail to show how they were carried out in practice rather than merely listed.
The methods generally match the variables in the student's hypotheses, showing clear intent to investigate the coastal environment systematically.
The sampling design is internally inconsistent, with the written method not matching the number of stations and repeats shown in the results.
One stated method, longshore-drift testing, does not appear in the results or analysis, which कमजोरens coherence.
The investigation methods do not fully align with the research question because the student does not collect a direct measure of dune formation.
Criteria C: Criterion C: Quality and Treatment of Information
3/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Data relevance and sufficiency
Moderate
C.2Presentation techniques
Moderate
C.3Convention adherence
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Criterion D: Written Analysis
3/8
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4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Analytical techniques
Poor
D.2Data interpretation and linking
Good
D.3Completeness of analysis
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Criterion E: Conclusion
1/2
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1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Conclusion quality and support
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Criterion F: Evaluation
2/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Evaluation depth and relevance
Good
F.2Improvement suggestions
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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