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IB Geography SL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent is Bahnhofsviertel, Frankfurt, suffering from urban stress?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: Criterion A: Fieldwork Question and Geographic Context
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Fieldwork question formulation and relevance
Excellent
A.2Geographic context and location specificity
Excellent
A.3Mapping and spatial representation
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The investigation question is clearly geographical, testable, and tightly linked to urban stress theory.
The study area is precise and feasible for primary data collection, with a well-defined transect route.
The mapping is strong, conventionally presented, and clearly locates both the wider context and the actual sampling path.
A brief statement of the exact start and end points of the transect would make the spatial extent even clearer.
The contextual framing is strong, but some model references should be kept fully consistent throughout the report.
Criteria B: Criterion B: Methods of Investigation
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Method description and relevance
Excellent
B.2Data collection techniques and implementation
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
The methods are described in detail and are clearly aligned to the research question and sub-hypotheses.
The investigation uses a substantial and varied body of primary data, including systematic sampling, repeated noise readings, traffic counts, EQS, and perception scores.
The operational detail is strong, making the work replicable and methodologically coherent.
Subjective measures such as EQS and perception scoring would be even stronger with a clearer explanation of how observer bias was controlled.
The statistical plan would benefit from a brief explanation of why different coefficients were selected for different relationships.
Criteria C: Criterion C: Quality and Treatment of Information
5/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Data relevance and sufficiency
Excellent
C.2Presentation techniques
Excellent
C.3Convention adherence
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Criterion D: Written Analysis
6/8
0
4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Analytical techniques
Good
D.2Data interpretation and linking
Good
D.3Completeness of analysis
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Criterion E: Conclusion
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Conclusion quality and support
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Criterion F: Evaluation
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Evaluation depth and relevance
Excellent
F.2Improvement suggestions
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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