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IB Geography HL Internal Assessment Example
“To what extent does urban stress in Pune City vary with distance from the CBD, in relation with the Bid-Rent Theory?”HL
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6
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: Criterion A: Fieldwork Question and Geographic Context
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Fieldwork question formulation and relevance
Excellent
A.2Geographic context and location specificity
Excellent
A.3Mapping and spatial representation
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student's inquiry is clearly geographical, focused, and testable, with a strong link to urban theory and a workable hypothesis structure.
The student identifies a specific fieldwork setting in Pune and shows that the transect could realistically be investigated through primary data collection.
The student's map gives a basic sense of the study area and route, including useful orientation details such as scale and direction.
The map needs fuller geographic conventions, including clearer labels, a legend, and more precise locational reference points.
One site reference is inconsistent, which weakens the precision of the study setting.
The spatial justification for the transect would be stronger if the student explained more clearly why the chosen spacing captures change across the city.
Criteria B: Criterion B: Methods of Investigation
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Method description and relevance
Excellent
B.2Data collection techniques and implementation
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student describes several relevant methods clearly, including repeated noise trials, systematic building sampling, surveys, photographs, and a transect-based approach.
The student's methods are closely aligned to the inquiry, with each technique chosen to help investigate urban stress, perceptions of place, or built-form change.
The student makes sensible attempts to improve comparability by standardising aspects of data collection such as measurement position and repeated readings.
Some methods would benefit from a fuller explanation of how participants or sites were selected so that representativeness is clearer.
A few techniques appear to produce only limited or unevenly reliable data, especially where sample sizes are small or readings are taken only once.
The suitability of some equipment and the logic behind certain measurement choices need a more explicit justification.
Criteria C: Criterion C: Quality and Treatment of Information
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Data relevance and sufficiency
Good
C.2Presentation techniques
Good
C.3Convention adherence
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Criterion D: Written Analysis
5/8
0
4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Analytical techniques
Good
D.2Data interpretation and linking
Good
D.3Completeness of analysis
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Criterion E: Conclusion
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Conclusion quality and support
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Criterion F: Evaluation
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Evaluation depth and relevance
Excellent
F.2Improvement suggestions
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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