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IB Geography HL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent does public transportation accessibility affect tourist density in Lisbon?HL
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Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: Criterion A: Fieldwork Question and Geographic Context
3/3
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2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Fieldwork question formulation and relevance
Excellent
A.2Geographic context and location specificity
Excellent
A.3Mapping and spatial representation
Good
Criteria Feedback
The student formulates a clearly geographical, focused question with a defensible hypothesis, allowing the investigation to be tested rather than merely described.
The Lisbon fieldwork sites are specific and feasible for primary data collection, and the comparison across contrasting locations gives the project a strong spatial basis.
The inclusion of locator maps helps situate the investigation at both national and city scales.
The main fieldwork-location map does not fully follow cartographic conventions, so the spatial evidence is relevant but not yet presented to a high standard.
The geographic context remains somewhat general and would be stronger if it more explicitly linked transport conditions to each of the selected sites.
The theoretical framing could be more operationalized by defining exactly how accessibility and tourist density are measured.
Criteria B: Criterion B: Methods of Investigation
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Method description and relevance
Good
B.2Data collection techniques and implementation
Good
Criteria Feedback
The submission describes relevant methods, including tourist counts, questionnaires, photographs and an accessibility index, all of which are clearly connected to the research question.
The methods are applied across five sites, giving the investigation a comparative structure and making the fieldwork viable.
The use of a fixed 10-minute count and the same questionnaire across sites provides some standardisation.
The accessibility index is not defined precisely enough, making the method difficult to replicate and weakening methodological transparency.
Sampling procedures are unclear, especially how tourists were identified and how respondents were selected.
The dataset is limited by a single short count period and one-day collection, so the data quality is not strong enough for the top band.
Criteria C: Criterion C: Quality and Treatment of Information
4/6
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3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Data relevance and sufficiency
Moderate
C.2Presentation techniques
Moderate
C.3Convention adherence
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Criterion D: Written Analysis
5/8
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4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Analytical techniques
Poor
D.2Data interpretation and linking
Good
D.3Completeness of analysis
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Criterion E: Conclusion
2/2
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1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Conclusion quality and support
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Criterion F: Evaluation
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Evaluation depth and relevance
Good
F.2Improvement suggestions
Good
Criteria Feedback
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