To what extent do symptoms of urban stress change as you travel away from the CBD of Bern, Switzerland?SL
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6
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 6
Criteria A: Criterion A: Fieldwork Question and Geographic Context
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Fieldwork question formulation and relevance
Excellent
A.2Geographic context and location specificity
Excellent
A.3Mapping and spatial representation
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
- Your research question is clearly geographical, focused, and easy to investigate in the field.
- You anchor the investigation in a specific place with well-chosen transects and clear locational maps.
- Your maps and route layout make the primary data collection easy to follow.
- The contextual background is broader than necessary in places and could be more tightly tied to the enquiry.
- Some early locator material adds less value than the transect map itself.
- The transition from context to the final question could be more concise and formal.
Criteria B: Criterion B: Methods of Investigation
3/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
B.1Method description and relevance
Good
B.2Data collection techniques and implementation
Good
Criteria Feedback
- You use a sensible range of primary methods that are clearly relevant to the question.
- Your fieldwork is systematic, with data collected at mapped stops along the transects.
- You provide enough evidence of actual field implementation to show the methods were used in practice.
- Several methods need more detail so that another researcher could repeat them exactly.
- Some techniques rely too much on personal judgement, especially the subjective scoring tasks.
- The survey and counting procedures are not fully standardised in the written description.
Criteria C: Criterion C: Quality and Treatment of Information
4/6
0
3
6
Criteria StrandsPro
C.1Data relevance and sufficiency
Good
C.2Presentation techniques
Good
C.3Convention adherence
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: Criterion D: Written Analysis
6/8
0
4
8
Criteria StrandsPro
D.1Analytical techniques
Moderate
D.2Data interpretation and linking
Good
D.3Completeness of analysis
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: Criterion E: Conclusion
2/2
0
1
2
Criteria StrandsPro
E.1Conclusion quality and support
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: Criterion F: Evaluation
2/3
0
2
3
Criteria StrandsPro
F.1Evaluation depth and relevance
Good
F.2Improvement suggestions
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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