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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) SL Internal Assessment Example
Within Generation Z in Kristiansand, is objective knowledge about shopping-bag environmental impacts associated with main bag choice (single-use plastic vs reusable shopping bag)?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: A: Research question and inquiry
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question and inquiry
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
You frame a clear, locally relevant environmental issue and connect it well to everyday behaviour in Kristiansand.
Your research question is focused, measurable, and clearly linked to the variables you investigate.
Adding a little more local background data would make the issue feel even more strongly evidenced in context.
Some background ideas are quite technical, so it would help to clarify which ones are most likely to influence respondents' decisions.
Criteria B: B: Strategy
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B.1Strategy
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
You describe a coherent strategy that goes beyond education alone and combines several realistic levers for behaviour change.
You show awareness that different groups may experience the strategy differently, especially in relation to cost and access.
You strengthen the discussion by suggesting practical adjustments that reduce inequity while keeping the environmental aim intact.
It would be even clearer if you separated which parts of the strategy are meant to change knowledge and which are meant to change behaviour.
The link between the intervention and the research question could be made more explicit when discussing how the strategy works in practice.
Criteria C: C: Method
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C.1Method
Excellent
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Criteria D: D: Treatment of data
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D.1Treatment of data
Moderate
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Criteria E: E: Analysis and conclusion
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E.1Analysis and conclusion
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: F: Evaluation
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F.1Evaluation
Good
Criteria Feedback
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