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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) HL Internal Assessment Example
What is the relationship between increased traffic levels and the revertability of the soil pH level, and what are the implications for urban planning and road development in Helsingborg, Sweden?HL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: A: Research question and inquiry
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A.1Research question and inquiry
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
Your investigation is grounded in a focused, location-specific environmental issue with a clear real-world significance.
You build your question from relevant background research and show that you understand why roadside soil chemistry matters.
Your background would be even stronger if the local Helsingborg context were explained more explicitly and the mechanism behind the pH changes were described more precisely.
The key terms in the question need slightly tighter definition so the intended meaning is unmistakable.
Criteria B: B: Strategy
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B.1Strategy
Excellent
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You identify a relevant management strategy and connect it to the roadside environmental issue.
You explain the tension between different stakeholder perspectives rather than just naming them.
The strategy is discussed more convincingly for contamination control than for direct pH management, so the link to your question could be more exact.
The trade-off would be clearer if you tied the environmental and economic tensions more specifically to the Helsingborg context.
Criteria C: C: Method
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C.1Method
Good
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Criteria D: D: Treatment of data
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D.1Treatment of data
Good
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Criteria E: E: Analysis and conclusion
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E.1Analysis and conclusion
Moderate
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Criteria F: F: Evaluation
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F.1Evaluation
Good
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