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IB Environmental systems and societies (ESS) SL Internal Assessment Example
To what extent has the installment of solar panels in an international school in Kenya helped reduce the carbon footprint and save on energy consumption of the institution since installation?SL
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7
Official IB Result
IB Grade: 7
Criteria A: A: Research question and inquiry
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Criteria StrandsPro
A.1Research question and inquiry
Good
Criteria Feedback
You chose a focused, school-based environmental issue that is clearly connected to a real mitigation strategy.
Your background research gives the investigation relevant local and global context, which helps frame why the question matters.
You connect the inquiry to measurable outcomes, which makes the topic workable as a case study.
Some background statements are scientifically imprecise, which weakens the foundation for the inquiry.
The wording of the question is broader than the evidence actually used, especially around energy consumption versus electricity bills.
The operational meaning of phrases like “to what extent” could be defined more precisely so the question is easier to answer directly.
Criteria B: B: Strategy
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B.1Strategy
Excellent
Criteria Feedback
You clearly identify the mitigation strategy and connect it directly to the environmental problem being investigated.
You explain how the solar installation reduces dependence on grid electricity, showing understanding of the strategy’s mechanism.
You develop a meaningful tension between environmental benefit and institutional budgeting priorities.
The solar installation and the energy-saving notices could be separated more clearly so the reader can see how each contributes.
The discussion could be tied even more tightly to the specific school case rather than leaning on broader examples.
The trade-off could be explored further by considering how changing costs or maintenance needs might affect the strategy over time.
Criteria C: C: Method
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C.1Method
Good
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria D: D: Treatment of data
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D.1Treatment of data
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria E: E: Analysis and conclusion
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E.1Analysis and conclusion
Poor
Criteria Feedback
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Criteria F: F: Evaluation
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F.1Evaluation
Moderate
Criteria Feedback
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